Sure - I edited it and added the discussion from the 8/20/14 meeting. I didn't add all the reflections over email..

As its our first 'mega-proposal' we broke it down into 7 sections, i figured people can reflect on improvements in each section. 

David

On Fri, Jan 16, 2015 at 5:08 PM, <hol@gaskill.com> wrote:
i'm totally ok with trying to remember them and adding it myself when i have a chance to read this version?

On 2015-01-16 16:40, David Keenan wrote:

Proposal Discussion sections from delegate meetings, are to be found under each iteration of this proposal 
 
If anyone wants to make this better organized go for it - 
 
-d

On Fri, Jan 16, 2015 at 4:21 PM, David Keenan <dkeenan44@gmail.com> wrote:
Or rather I meant - adding it now..
 
I know how you are about imperatives!
 
-d

On Fri, Jan 16, 2015 at 4:20 PM, David Keenan <dkeenan44@gmail.com> wrote:
Excellent point, Hol. I hadn't yet gotten to it..
 
Add it now..
 
d
 

On Fri, Jan 16, 2015 at 3:34 PM, <hol@gaskill.com> wrote:
does this posting incorporate feedback already given on the previous proposal?  i see your comments there but none of the others from when it first came up for discussion.

cheers

On 2015-01-16 15:27, David Keenan wrote:

Hi all, 
 
Please go to:
 
...and click on DZB's proposal 'Opening Omni' which i formatted for the wiki. Add your amendments and reflections into each subsection discussion / comment area (for areas 1-7 of the proposal) and begin dialogue within your collectives if that's OK?
 
Thanks!
 
David
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