Hi Divine,
Thank you for getting in contact, YES, I am very interested in your help!
We were busy at the lab making the prototypes, so I apologize for not
getting back to you then! Here is a link to the gardenmesh video I showed
you in the meeting (
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WJJiGtuPJF4). This
version doesn't have any of the text overlays that you saw but I think it's
helpful anyway. I have copied my cameraman Vassil, and the sudoroom
listserve so we can all benefit from your wisdom!
I obviously have no professional tools, but to help visualize what we want
to put together, I've made a little 6-pc storyboard, nothing is set in
stone though.
The main points we want to make in the video about the idea are 1) the very
cheap price, 2) the access to your own real-time data without any
configuration, 3) our plan to build philanthropy into the business model -
buy one, give one to a needy community, and 4) how this data can be used to
make better choices
In order to clench the NatGeo grant, we have to make it all pertain to
feeding 9 billion people.
Rough Script:
Cell 1: Hi, I'm Mario Gabiati, and I'm here to tell you about a great idea
that will help us feed 9 billion people, which sounds like a big problem,
but it starts with feeding just one. I was having a lot of trouble feeding
myself from my own garden because I was guessing all the time; guessing
what plants would do well in my garden, guessing they'd be okay when I left
for work or on vacation. I wanted to find something that would let me
monitor my garden when I was away or sleeping, but nothing on the market
could monitor everything I wanted, and were much more expensive than I
wanted to spend; anywhere from 50-100 dollars!
Cell 2: (we were planing to show some poorly producing community garden
plots here as b-roll while I talked more about the program). Feeding 9
billion people on 100% industrialized agriculture is impossible and
probably unhealthy, and studies show that people are turning to home
gardening as a way to get fresher, more wholesome food. The popularity of
community and home gardening has increased substantially, and now over a
third of US households are growing food! But what if we could grow even
more food in our homes and community gardens using nothing more than a $5
sensor and our smartphone?
Cell 3: (now that I'm writing this out, we may want to change the order -
the intent was to briefly touch on the world-wide implications of this
technology, and our desire to bring it to nations where home gardening may
mean the difference between surviving and starving). The very low price to
build our sensor means that we can bring this technology out of the US and
bring it to places where growing your own food may mean the difference
between survival and starvation or malnutrition. Would you buy a sensor
for $10 if you knew a sensor just like yours would be given to a family in
Venezuela or Yemen?
Cell 4: (this will be b-roll of us installing the prototypes at East Bay
Vivarium on Friday and/or lush community garden plots with our sensors in
them). Incredibly easy to install, just activate and place - and already I
can receive real-time data about my garden.
Cell 5: (Info-graphic? white-board animation? i can use all the ideas you
have!). This technology requires no configuration, it simply begins
serving data as soon as it's installed, giving you real-time access to your
garden's data. With your permission, we can aggregate this information
with all the other sensors on earth and begin building comprehensive
micro-climate maps that can help give you suggestions on what kinds of
plants and vegetables to grow in your specific area.
Cell 6: (closure, reiteration of the feeding 9 billion theme) Feeding 9
billion people isn't such a huge problem when it's fun and easy to grow a
percentage of your own food and these sensors make growing your own food
much easier at a price that brings it into the reach of billions of people!
Please visit our website below to learn more information, and lets mesh!
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Anyway, this is what I've got so far, let me know what your thoughts are!
Thank you!
-Mario
On Sun, Aug 6, 2017 at 3:51 PM, Divine Adesida <divine.adesida(a)gmail.com>
wrote:
Hi Mario,
It's Divine.
We discussed that I would help with the script for the video this
afternoon.
Did you want to send me what you had?
Cheers,
Divine
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Divine Adesida